I decided to scan Joe's sketch before I add watercolor so I can give him both choices in print.
Copic marker on bristol plate
In this case, again the eyes are the key to the expression. I did exaggerate the intensity, because I thought it was a powerful and engaging feature that should caught all the attention. In all my drawings I try to give them certain personality that has to do with my personal perception of the subject as first impression. The contrast of Don's beautiful light gray eyes is in striking contrast with the rich black tone of the shirt.
Portrait study of Don I.
Copic marker on bristol plate